This is an attempt at continuing “The library..” – Honest feedback requested.. Should this be continued, rather can this be continued? Suggestions are most welcome.
“Hmmm.. ab mujhe koi.. intezaar kahaan.. na na na naa na.. na na.. kahaan..” – Shreya hummed to herself.. tapping the pen against her lips..
Can this song take her one step closer to her dream? She couldn’t make up her mind. “Wo jo kehte the.. aafshaar kahaan.. AA-F-SHAAR..” The pronunciation will have to be correct; points will be reduced if any mistakes are made. Small things make a BIG difference!! The college exams dates were approaching – the contest dates will be declared in a few days – Dates and deadlines – will the chase ever end?
Shreya wanted to be a singer. No, it wasn’t a childhood dream. No, it wasn’t an inspiration after watching Sonam Kapoor’s cutesy act in Delhi 6. She just felt she could sing – she had no formal training. A case of being the “in-tune” voice in an antakshari. The thought gave her something to dream about, to look forward to. It gave her a goal, which she would pursue till achieved.
She couldn’t ignore the exams. She needed to complete her formal education. They wouldn’t take her dream seriously, if she sidelined college – She was smart enough to realize that. “I will clear all the hurdles” – Shreya thought to herself.. “Now, what’s wrong with this guy?” The guy with a sad expression lurking on his face, a face which was transformed when that smile with a hint of mischief, flashed. Nice hair, impish smile – cute guy! The guy had that unhappy expression on.. Everyone has their share of troubles. Maybe he has had a bad day. Anyway, he seemed to be studying hard, which reminded Shreya .. “EXAMS”!!!
5 comments:
midzz.. very nice... now its from gals perspective... gosh finally she notices Ajay....
cont kar, seems interesting
Hey ..you know what ...I think you should continue..
I want an autographed copy of this book... :-)
one quest- is this a path to self discovery ? :-)
-Rashmi.
Hmmmmmmmmmm.............. good and thoughtful.......
why isnt nethng mentioned about the guy..n why is he sad...he was astonished b4...y sad now
Mridu, nice one...Take it on from here..As I said before, I like Muru's idea..Take it from
Ajay went red as he noticed her glance at him. It was not a stare or a look into his eyes or anything; a glance...a mere glance that's all. But that was enough; at least it was a beginning..."Of what?" he pondered to himself and smiled..
this is all i can think of now ;)
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