July 3, 2012

The Long Wait..

Everyone was out in anticipation. The orange sky was streaked with lightning. The ground was parched and dry. A fierce gust of wind blew the dust and dry leaves in circles. And then it started - the rains.. It started with big drops making the ground smell divinely. The boom of thunder made him shiver. And soon he was completely drenched as was everyone around him. All of them shouted in joy and leapt all over the place. He smiled ruefully, one thing was missing.. Her..
He was with the crowd, but lonely..  He had a smile on his face, but he was sad..

Last year, she had been with him. Playing and jumping about in the rains.. Singing bawdy songs, splashing water on him.. Enjoying the feel of the rains as much as he did. And how pretty she looked.. How could he ever forget that! Those huge eyes of hers looking at him with so much love. How could he not miss her! She wasn't even scared of thunder and lightning. She had once joked – ‘if I kiss you, would you turn into my prince?’ He laughed silently and looked around. Everyone was happy and she would have wanted him to be happy. She had not come back after the deep sleep she went into. He realised he would never be able to forget her. Will she come back? That was a question he didn’t have an answer to..

And then he heard a rustle among the bushes behind him. He turned around. And there she was - Eyes shining, a broad smile plastered on her face and both of them said the same thing - "Croak! Croak! Ribbit! Ribbit"
Happy Monsoon, people!! :)

8 comments:

Deepa said...

god ur the curiosity killer queen..if i were to b typically me KLPD queen...how i was so immersed in reading n then there come "riiibbbiitttt" shaaaay

Shubhi said...

You are a new age Jeff Archer!:)

Lovely and unexpected ending! Though midway i thought the story was going to be melancholic!

Not that I would have minded;)

Love,
Shubhi!

toniclime said...

Happy monsoon!!!

Avani said...

hehehehehe.. cute.. :)

~ M ~ said...

@ Dee Dee.. I like puttin in a twist to just see how the story works on your mind..

@ Shubhi - Too much!! Thanks though :)

@ Toniclime.. Thanks n wishin u the same! Wish u had a simpler name lekin.. Hehehe

Evanescent Flame said...

nice read... fun ending...

Happy Monsoon...¿;-)

~ M ~ said...

@ Avani & Pradeep - Thankoos!

Shubhi said...

Put up a new post!
Thanks...glad u liked the flowery bits!;)

Would you like me to write a guest story post for you?:p

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